very entertaining
a very visual song, good job on the melodies and the accompanients
i agree with wyldfyre1 that the drums at least need some reverb and eq to balance out its sound with the rest of the piece
i like the energy throughout the song, but i feel the middle section with the "army" and "fighting" could have developed a little more without the obvious fade into a higher volume.
and at the end of that volume swell, i could hear some clipping so there's definitely more room for mixing that section since it has a more complex arrangement
but again, this song gets the job done in respect to ur story and provides a good listen so SWELL JOB! (b")b